First Form Of Feedback

After completing my first draft edit of my opening sequence, Insipid. I gained feedback in both the forms of comments from my teacher through Google drive. As well as feedback from my target audience. The key points from the feedback includes;

• Increasing the length of the opening as it is considerably short
• Increasing the level of suspense through more shots and shots of different types
• Also the sound is only on a single level and further layers should be added
• Also the sequence lacks some fluency as it is hard to understand

Having received the feedback I will now go back to the filming and editing stage in order to add length an increase the quality of my sequence.